John Raison – a work of fiction – TTPAPC 2022

I’m sitting at the window seat on the lower level of a train, caked in layers of clothing like

strata. I’m early but the train was already here getting cleaned, and they said I could sit inside

to keep out of the chill. It’s frozen and dark out there, with the dingy station’s lights not working

properly. Some flicker and some are just hollow and dead. No one’s come to bring them back

to life yet. I’m not sure they ever will.

             I don’t really know why I chose the lower level. Maybe it was something about the

stairs. All I know is now I’m sitting level with the platform, and there are ants right outside.

They’re charming, in a really weird way. I like the way they walk in little zig-zags and bump

into each other and wave their little antennae and grab a little crumb – maybe from a bag of

chips somebody bought from the vending machine over there – and hold it up proudly. They’re

cute, despite their insect-ness. I hope they’re not too frosty.

           They’re pretty incredibly small. I’d hate that, to be that small, especially while outside

in the chill. I remember when I was a kid I used to get this horrible sensation where I’d feel the

room swimming, getting larger around me, and I would feel just so, so, small. I think I vomited

the first time it happened. I remember the room hurling outwards, ballooning bigger and bigger

while I crumpled ever inwards. My stomach never stood a chance. The train starts to pull out

of the station, and I stop watching the ants.

            The first time I can properly remember the vomit-inducing feeling was when I was

little. Maybe five, maybe less. All I know is I was sitting in my great-grandmothers house,

playing with a jigsaw puzzle when I lost the last piece somehow. I was stressing out trying to

find it, and while getting low under the lounge, the bad feeling started coming on and I knew I

was going to be sick. But before I could do anything I was already outside, crying into my

mum’s shoulder. Because what they told me later was there was never a jigsaw puzzle and I

never got under the furniture looking for the missing piece. I was sitting on the ground, staring

at the T.V. when they noticed me go all sorts of awful shades and got me outside before I

belched my guts out so hard I started crying. Then I was crying because I couldn’t remember

how I’d gotten there. My memory was wrong. I was a little ant that accidently got stuck on the

train and was now zigzagging up, far, far away from where he was meant to be. So, I cried.

            I’m looking at that ant now, as it presses itself against the train window. I’m not sure

how it got in. From the way it’s stressing out, I’m sure that it doesn’t know either. I pick it up

on my finger and stare at it as it stares back at me. I wonder what it sees. How it knows what

it sees is real. I have to remind myself that it’s an ant, and existentialism is something pretty

foreign to it. I have a feeling – as I watch it walk in circles on my thumb –its inner monologue

is something akin to a haiku poem. Another station stops and goes by, and I place the ant back

on the windowsill. It looks hungry, so I reach into my bag and unwrap my sandwich, handing

it a crumb. It munches hungrily and I do the same. And as I eat my mind drifts back, like a bug

caught in a swimming pool being sucked towards the filter, to my memory.

            My great-grandmother died in twenty-fourteen. She lived in Mudgee. It’s a long way

away. I know because the train has been going for a while now and I’ve still got ages to go. I

went to the funeral but I haven’t been back since. I don’t really know why I’m going now. I

tell myself it’s to see her grave. The ant tells me a haiku. I try to grab hold of it, to remember

it, but it slips out of my fingers like a slick, writhing worm, and I forget.

            My great-grandmother used to confuse me with her son, my grandfather, because we

have the same name. She tried to give me money, and was confused when my family

wouldn’t let her change her will to give him/me everything. She had dementia. Her memories

fictionalised themselves. I’m terrified for my own.

            Memory is something important to me, mostly because I think someday I’ll lose it. The

ant tries to reassure me, but its next haiku just goes over my head. It doesn’t matter. I don’t

think anyone could say anything that would make me feel better about it. I’d rather they didn’t

try to tell me ‘everything would be okay’ when they can’t prove it. The ant calls me a pessimist

in an especially scathing haiku. I tell it I prefer the term sceptic, or realist. I’ve had my hopes

crushed far too many times by false promises to ever fall for them again. So, I keep it shoved

down deep, and I stay terrified.

            One thing I learnt from my great-grandmother is that losing my memory is different to

death, mostly because there won’t be any closure for my loved ones. Not for a long while, at

least, and I don’t want to do that to them. Because if all I am is my memories and my memories

are no longer, then I am not me. They’ll have to care for a stranger and pretend he is me. They’ll

be living a fiction as much as I will.

             I stare at the ant, which for the first time is speechless, and drop it another couple of

crumbs. As it eats I continue to stare at it, and for the first time I wonder if it is real. After a

couple of minutes of thinking, the answer comes up indecisive. Are you real? I whisper to it.

All I get is another haiku:

                                                               From my eyes, I see

                                                         A world made unknowable

                                                          Like sand was once stone


            I sit back in my chair. I don’t think the haiku answers my question, but I can tell that

isn’t the point. The point is ants can’t do what this ant just did; what it’s been doing since the

beginning. So that probably means it’s not real. I’m disappointed, but not really surprised. I

have many weird pockets in my memory that don’t make sense: a stranger walking up to me

and telling me when my own birthday is, or seeing people who couldn’t be at places where I

remember them. I remember it all vividly but it cannot exist. Like the jigsaw puzzle, it’s fiction.

And still it’s part of me.

            We arrive in Mudgee. Which is impossible, because we only just left and there isn’t

even a train from Wollongong to Mudgee. Actually, Mudgee doesn’t even have a train station.

Yet despite all that I’m standing in front of my great grandmother, her headstone gleaming in

the glacial sunlight. I realise I should’ve brought flowers, or anything, really. All I have is the

not-real ant to set down in the frosted grass above her. I feel like I’m molten wax; all slow and

formless. My mind is sticky sweet. I can’t even bring myself to say anything. Nothing out loud.

Nothing real.

            How do I even know this is real? That I’m real? And do I even care? I can’t answer the

questions. I turn away from my great grandmother, and the not-real ant pours another haiku

from its new home into the air:

                                                                 The lost wanderer

                                                      Murmurs of their coming death

                                                                  To no other soul

                                                                                                                                And so I don’t.